"Its Over Now" (BRANDDDD NEW VERSE)

Soo, i am always proud when i pen something. ...MEANINGFUL. Since my '06 hiatus and writers block that i never recovered from, i rarely get an opportunity to jot finished products and everything. I like how my stuff used to FLOWWW. with ease. I always recollect back to '05 when i spawned some masterpieces in my eyes

In any matter, some of you took note when I presented a short while ago "It's Over Now" bringing it to the forefront as a throwback from 2005. Well, recent situations put me back in touch with the sentiments of "its Over Now" I was thus inspired to pen something ENTIRELY new. I would like to share..

Its Over Now :BRAND NEW third verse. Circa de march '09:

Verse 3: Hannibal aka Lyrical Laureate

My heart will never mend,
and i thought- what we started' never end//
u started slidin', wit ya smart and clever friend
wen u give ya heart, they either discard it, shred, or bend
so we parted, its like a scarred and severed limb
as for cupid's arrow- a target, ive neva been
but i let it prick me, and now im sickly..
you held my heart ransom, i let you stick me//
wen we cut, we were closer than a schick be
we had a deal, that you brokered and you gipped me//
its all in the cards, wit poker, yea you tricked me
love lockdown, [had me] in choker when you gripped me//
no need to bicker, we stay spazzin' see
it all falls down, and that's the grave gravity//
to emotions, we've been a slave haven't we
no devotion, yea we've strayed haven't we//

CHORUS (sampled from Justin Timberlake "Never Again")
[too late, it's over now]
it's [too late, it's over now]
guess it's just [too, too late, it's over now]


This note is long enough, so for the original two verses.. see..
http://www.facebook.com/note.php?note_id=58192074500

i think in ways, the first two verses are better. i was a better more seasoned, spry lyricist in '05. But this recent jotting had experiences behind it. The first set was written abstract. not having been through anything like that, but imagining.

but yea, i'm proud of this, just like i'm proud of "POET TO EMCEE" and "INSPIRED" (http://www.facebook.com/note.php?note_id=2235969500&id=51301687&index=13)

Ciao y'all. Thanks for reading

February Freestyle

This started as a random line conjured while showerin', i liked it so much, it became my facebook status, then a full fledged "freestyle" well, i'd like it to be a cipher, so feel free to input

Verse 1: Hannibal aka Lyrical Laureate

Any challenge made or listed we honor
then I’m beatin’ chicks, how CHRIS did Rhianna
it’s abuse –man- you’ll miss a tooth
u cudnt touch me wit a swift masseuse //
claim u a SLUGGER, u aint mister RUTH
I be wit the BABEs, a lime, and a twist of goose//
oops, ( I mean) grey goose and a twist of lime
I spit the truth and it flips your mind//
lay down the Traps, and u Saps trip the mines
forget writin’, u should rip ur rhymes
-Tear ya scrolls, I don’t fear you foes
fit in ya shoes, who wud wanna wear ya soles?
You a SHOOK poet, SHAKESpeare, I Hear ya prose
I’mma bubble from the ground like Aerosoles//
-Ascendin’ fast, but nowhere near my goals
Intervene.. I wont just STEP ON, imma smear ya toes//

Sooo, yea.. most of you i tagged for a reason.. i either want u to read it, or contribute...

[edit] 1.13.09

Verse 2: Andrew 'Phever' Case

You smear toes, suckas bow to my adrenaline
and elbows, leave tough guys feminine
Who his him - Call me P-H Ali
Rumble through ya jungle no Rambo on me
I bob an weave, wit the greatest of ease
swift jabs in my vocab, no scrapes on he
On 3, -emcees take heed
Everything I talk about - I breathe - I bleed
Nigga please..
You ain't harder than me
I gotta diamond personality on a Teflon sleeve
Flow harder than levee water against the banks of Orleans
No malice or disrespect I'm just hopin yall see
I ain't budgin'
I'm ya virgin cousin on her period - nah you ain't fuckin
wit' a favorite-up on his latest
this rap shit is a game I should nickname it VEGAS...

Verse 3: Jonah aka K Dash

you must've heard that i'm nice burnin a mic
flip ya world upside down chris brown turn into ike//
no bitch in me, a virginal dike
the heavyweight rapper is back on a track its return of the mike// -
tyson, or better yet i'll settle for dyson (michael eric dyson)
a lyrical street fighter better than Ken or M bison//
better be nice when, steppin to write
cuz from my level i can't even SPEAK WORDS, i just set em in flight//
RELEASE VERBS, and predicates like a teacher
be sure he more elegant than a mink fur//
think for himself, individual style -- not swagga
cuz swagga's for kids and pop actors//
its been a while since, i been astounded
i sit around with a frown when i listen now, its//
ridiculous how this, position of crown shifts
these days they give a deal based on hits on ya soundclick//
myspace millionaires and i aint hatin but
i could take a dump and sell it nobody would say it sucks//
so when i say i'm just better
i dont even have to prove a word to make it so
i just turn on the radio

Verse 4: Dion 'Arsenix' Castillo

it's funny how dudes think they hot and got the streets going crazy /
when their delivery's all wrong like a breech born baby /
maybe they ass backwards got it all reversed /
I'll wade through this talent pool, jump in feet first /
I could drop one line and outshine a weak verse /
and do it again and again like there's a need to rehearse /
it's practice, and so funny how easy the math is /
add up all the emcees,divide em by me, and you'll see they're (their) average /
I'ma savage, a beast, a track master cannibal /
escaping societies traps, I'm no black captured animal /
my president is black, but I'm still a target /
if I'm thrown in jail, will he grant me a pardon /
I know that man can't solve all our damn problems /
but I know he'll solve what he can while he's in office /
Sorry I had to black out, gimme a minute, I'll come around /
how smart am I, if they still say I'm too smart when I'm dumbing down?